First, what is Zoom
Zoom is an American communications technology company headquartered in San Jose, California. It provides face time and online chat services or you can learn online like now. Now Zoom is the most important thing for learning or working because you can’t go to school or go to work. Zoom made a lot of money now because everyone in every country used it.
Lets know about zoom
Zoom is an app that we used for learning now because we didn’t go to school. Zoom is like a facetime that you can talk with each other. In the past Zoom is used for talking about business or for working online. But now all of the students are use it. We learning by using zoom and everyone in the world use it. But we nit only use for learning we use it to do an activity like exercising too. In one room we can add hundred of people in the zoom meeting room in one time without internet problems.You can make a leader of the meeting that called co-host for invite anyone to join the meeting.
Should parents worried about using this app?
In my opinion is no because this app we used for learning or you can talk with your friends like facetime. Also our parents can take care us while we are learning too. And it’s safety too because we can make a private room that has ID and password so know one can get in the meeting room. Zoom has good things and bad things
Good things of this app
- Used for learning.
- Study at home.
- Have more times with our parents.
- Have more time for rest.
- Less work than study at school.
- Make us know more about technology.
Bad things of this app
1.Boring.
2.Hard to understand teacher.
3. Waste electricity.
4.Need to pay a lot of money for internet.
5.lost sight.
End note
Zoom is not boring like we were taught because it can do much more things in this app. Like zooming with friends or talking with friends. We can have fun with it different way. Like do an exercise like yoga or any kind of exercising. We have to use this app for a while because In Thailand all of the students need to use this app until the school is open on 1st July. Or if the corona virus is not gone yet maybe we have to used zoom all year.
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